The Night of the Balloons

October 9, 2010
By , Plainsboro, NJ
The balloons slowly drifted away,
Into the indigo blue sky,
Covered with many bright stars.

They were flying higher and higher.
As the cool breeze swirled around them,
The balloons also danced blissfully.

When I lifted my head up once more,
They have already escaped,
Into the indigo blue night.





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IamtheStargirl said...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 6:05 pm

Bautufl, and so full of blue. It makes blue seem like a happy color, instead of the ubiquitous and popular interpretation as the hue of depression.

Thank you for writing this. 

<A little advice, your poem seems to change from the past to the present in the last verse, that's something to watch for.>

Thank you once more, keep on making the world a brighter place :)

 
WritingWithInk replied...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 7:04 pm
so sorry for this delayed reply but thanks for the advice and glad you liked it:)
 
zambi said...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 9:04 am
i really like this. makes me wish i was a balloon rather than just another person trying to find happiness.
 
WritingWithInk replied...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 7:05 pm
:) glad you liked it!
 
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