Can You Feel the Rain?

October 1, 2010
By HippieNamedAnna PLATINUM, Kansas City, Missouri
HippieNamedAnna PLATINUM, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Let It Be-The Beatles
Music is the only thing that makes sense any more-Me
Make love, not war-a bunch of people
Roses are red, Violets are blue, I have five fingers, The middle one's for you-Me :)


Can
you feel
the rain
fall on
your head?
Can
you make
the pain
feel like
its fled?
Of course you can't,
its not your life.
You can't
control it,
even in strife.

Can
you feel
the rain
fall on
your head?
Can
you make
the pain
feel like its fled?
The answer
is
no.
But you
can try.
You might
not
succeed
but you'll then
be mine.


The author's comments:
I was downtown and heard 2 boys about 16 or 17 years old, and the song kept repeating," Can you feel the rain" so I guess that is what inspired me.

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