Cold and Broken

October 5, 2010
By ForeverZ29 BRONZE, Brighton, Michigan
ForeverZ29 BRONZE, Brighton, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is a vast land of broken dreams...and it always ends in tears" -Unknown-

Rivers, lakes, and oceans stream down my red splotchy face.
What once was my biggest fear is now haunting me in reality.
My head told me this was going to become my unrealistic death.
My heart told me to be brave, and take a chance.
A torture moment that still haunts me today

That horrible mistake I made taking my heart into consideration.
My heart is now shattered in a million pieces, like a broken mirror.
Forget picking up the leftover remains and pieces,
For just like a broken mirror, it is better to leave those shattered pieces alone,
Then to hurt yourself trying to fix it.

He gave me his shoulder to cry on and his heart to love me.
Now I know it was all a theater show to him.
I was hanging over the edge of a cliff, ready to fall for him.
But when I let go, he wasn’t there to catch me.

Falling for something this wonderful should not have felt so awful.
I’m ashamed with myself.
I didn’t see the mask that was covering his perfections,
Nor did I see the stage we were performing on.

So in my bed I lay, curled in a useless little lump.
Hyperventilating in between my flowered comforter and zebra print blanket
Being happy isn’t a part of me anymore,
Because here I’m dying,
Cold and broken.

The author's comments:
I was thinking about a really awful heartbreak I went through and was really upset. I decided to turn my feelings into a poem.

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on Oct. 20 2010 at 5:06 pm
soccerlove BRONZE, Brighton, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\"This day I will marry my friend, the one I laugh with, live for, dream with, love\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\"
-Source Unknown

I love your piece!!! keep posting more i love your work!! :)))

Jordan_M GOLD said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 9:33 pm
Jordan_M GOLD, Hartland, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." ~Dr. Seuss
"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them." ~Walt Disney
"All the world's a stage." ~William Shakespeare

Oh my gosh that is so good!!! :DDDDD

R.Moxie said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 9:18 pm
Miss-- YEAH! You ROCK! Published-- NExt time email your English TEACHER to let her know immediately-- SO EXCITED FOR YOU!

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