Rise With the Sun

October 12, 2010
By dmta22 BRONZE, Etobicoke, Other
dmta22 BRONZE, Etobicoke, Other
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Too many to list!! But here are a few:
“Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.” ~Anonymous
“Every blade of grass has its angel that bends over it
and whispers, 'Grow, grow.'” ~The Talmud
“We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give.” ~Winston Churchill


As the sun rises far in the east,
I hear the sounds of beautiful nature.
My small world begins to open,
And once again my hopes rise.

The birds begin their melodious chirping,
The winds start to blow,
The ocean produces an image of intensity,
And the sky begins to blossom.

I drift far away in my unrealistic thoughts,
I imagine I’m flying with swans,
The water is my safe home,
And for a brief moment I am someone special.

The whisper of green leaves wake my soul,
The flowers bloom my thoughts,
The branches show their consistent support,
And the warmth from the sun lifts me high.

As the sun rises far in the east,
I hear the sounds of beautiful nature.
My small world begins to open,
And once again my hopes rise.


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dmta22 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 19 2010 at 11:21 pm
dmta22 BRONZE, Etobicoke, Other
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Too many to list!! But here are a few:
“Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.” ~Anonymous
“Every blade of grass has its angel that bends over it
and whispers, 'Grow, grow.'” ~The Talmud
“We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give.” ~Winston Churchill

Glad you could relate to it.

on Oct. 17 2010 at 5:08 pm
yomaster BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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You put into words exactly what I feel! Love it!

dmta22 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 17 2010 at 3:46 pm
dmta22 BRONZE, Etobicoke, Other
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Too many to list!! But here are a few:
“Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.” ~Anonymous
“Every blade of grass has its angel that bends over it
and whispers, 'Grow, grow.'” ~The Talmud
“We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give.” ~Winston Churchill

Thank you. Your feedback means a lot. :)

on Oct. 17 2010 at 1:48 pm
blackraindrops BRONZE, Paradise, California
1 article 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning to dance in the rain."
"The reason people hold onto memories so tight is because they are the only things that don't change, even when everything else does."

this is so beautiful!

dmta22 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 17 2010 at 12:01 pm
dmta22 BRONZE, Etobicoke, Other
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Too many to list!! But here are a few:
“Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.” ~Anonymous
“Every blade of grass has its angel that bends over it
and whispers, 'Grow, grow.'” ~The Talmud
“We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give.” ~Winston Churchill

Thank you so much. :) I'm glad you liked it.

on Oct. 17 2010 at 10:40 am
BlackScarlett SILVER, Hanson, Massachusetts
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Character cannot be develped in ease and quiet. Only through expeerience of trial and suffering can the soul be strengthened, vision cleared, ambition insoired and succes achieved." -Helen Keller

this is a beautiful poem i like the line and the sky begins to blossom for me this metaphor is very beautiful and really i appretiate your point of view.


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