Alone

October 13, 2010
By Ravenclaw34 SILVER, Park City, Utah
Ravenclaw34 SILVER, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Who is Josh Groban Kill Yourself!!!!- Glee


I
sit here quietly
feeling the wave of silence waft over me
how could you say those things?
I thought we were cool
i thought we were friends
i guess all friendships are like days
they have to end
i’d rather have no friends then count you as one
i’d rather have 1 friend who wished me good
then 200 friends who wished me nothing
thats not a friendship its fake
it will brittle and break
i wear the label of unpopularity proudly
and I watch as you
once my friend scale he ranks of the fake and brittle
waiting for the day when all you want
will go away
and your fake friends will eat you alive
and look for another in your stead
i’ll still be here unpopular
tormented everyday
maybe you will see the error of your ways
maybe you won’t and you will be
fake for as long as you can be
but when you find your throne of bones
has broken and you ain’t got no one
don’t come looking for me
i’ll be gone
away from this place
hopefully somewhere better and i will be happy
and not thinking of you


The author's comments:
Ughhhh high school

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HFAIHFGAW said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 1:51 pm
LOVE IT!! IkR!!! high school sucks vut hopefully it gets bttr

Lol!!!!!!! said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 1:48 pm
Way to relate 2 high school!!! IKR it sucks!!!

on Oct. 18 2010 at 1:46 pm
LOVE IT!!!!

GolLuM said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 1:43 pm
Nice poem keep writing!!!!! I can toally relate!!!

on Oct. 18 2010 at 12:19 pm
Taylorrrrr SILVER, Plantsville, Connecticut
8 articles 1 photo 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
its hard to keep a secret if its written all over your body,

This is really good. And If you ever need anyone Im here to talk to.

 


on Oct. 18 2010 at 9:31 am
bluegirl440 DIAMOND, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Everybody lies. -House

absolutly fantastic!!!!

yodaarulze said...
on Oct. 17 2010 at 10:23 pm
Love it your amazing!!! Keep Writing!!!!!

on Oct. 17 2010 at 5:05 pm
yomaster BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
1 article 0 photos 8 comments
so true!! I can completely relate, in fact, that's basically me, except that I like highschool

on Oct. 17 2010 at 3:59 pm
volleyball17 PLATINUM, Grimes, Iowa
23 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
You cant fail if you dont try

omg!! this is amazing!! i can relate to this sooo well which makes it even better

 


on Oct. 17 2010 at 1:55 pm
Dessometrics BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
currently seeking

so understandable high school is tough im only a sophomore and i get it lol

on Oct. 17 2010 at 12:55 am
I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
15 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible. " ~ Cadet Maxim
that's an awesome quote learn it, love it, live by it.

So true about high school. I am a freshman although I haven't been there for a year. I don't care for high school... at least in middle school all my friends were together. Great job! keep writting

on Oct. 16 2010 at 9:09 pm
Aerolin PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
34 articles 19 photos 133 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fear is only in the mind"

great description of high school, i completely agree with what you're saying about wanting one good friend instead of 200 fake ones


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