and I thought you were different.

October 13, 2010
you say im diffrent
i said your lying
you said i love you
and now im cryng. .

you hug me
and i pull away
you feel unloved
i reasure u its okay .

you say its over
i say its not.
you walk away
my heart beat stops.

you seem so happy
and im so broken
you laugh and smile
while my wounds are open .

and youve moved on
and i think "please"
but you got so many girls
10x better than me

you said i was diffrent.
i knew you were lying.
no more i love yous
and im still crying..

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This article has 14 comments. Post your own now! said...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 6:31 pm
WOW just WOW i loved it i can reliate soooooooo much!!!
breezer11 said...
Oct. 17, 2010 at 8:40 pm
wanna write a good poem? ITS AMAZING.
Dragonscribe said...
Oct. 17, 2010 at 6:38 pm
I LOVE this! The rhyming, simple as it was, really made the poem. Really excellent.
CammyLashay said...
Oct. 17, 2010 at 6:11 pm
i don't understand why i feel so sad reading this poem maybe because it brings back so many memories...great work love it at that =')
SamanthaBarwick said...
Oct. 17, 2010 at 1:49 pm
I really like this.  The words mean so much.  I just hate it when people don't use proper punctuation and grammar, I mean come on now, you are posted something online for other people to read and vote on. I would of given you all five stars, but your to ignorant to use capital letters and correct spellings and punctuation correctly.
I_am_the_only_me said...
Oct. 17, 2010 at 1:03 am
You will find someone soooo much better, and when you do he will probably be back. Guys suck sometimes I'm almost 15 in like a month an I choose not to date. I see no point, someone always gets hurt I'm just going to wait until it matters when someone gets hurt. Keep writting! Great job!
kmarie14 said...
Oct. 17, 2010 at 12:02 am
wow. this totally describes my guy life...guys are so retarded...just hang in there....ha ha ha :) i really like this! :) thanks for posting ! check out my work if u get time i would love to hear ur opinion
Jordyn said...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 10:43 pm
honey this is great. i know guys can suckk but its okay you will find someone wayyyyyyyyy better
Aerolin said...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 9:11 pm
this is really great and sooooo true, guys suck sometimes
tHEaWESOMEoNE said...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 8:38 pm
This is beatiful, i really liked it.
h1m_rocks said...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 8:23 pm
nice poem!!
holly.nicole said...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 6:41 pm
I really loved this is reminds me of someone.....thank you for writing this =D
WhiteShadows said...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 6:29 pm
I liked this a lot. It's very sad though...:(
Dashes105 said...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 2:16 pm
I love this but my favorite part would have to be "you said i love you and now im crying"
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