and I thought you were different.

October 13, 2010
By kaylakyreebaby SILVER, Concord, California
kaylakyreebaby SILVER, Concord, California
8 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A man can travel the whole world in search
for what he needs and find it when he returns home"


you say im diffrent
i said your lying
you said i love you
and now im cryng. .

you hug me
and i pull away
you feel unloved
i reasure u its okay .

you say its over
i say its not.
you walk away
my heart beat stops.


you seem so happy
and im so broken
you laugh and smile
while my wounds are open .

and youve moved on
and i think "please"
but you got so many girls
10x better than me


you said i was diffrent.
i knew you were lying.
no more i love yous
and im still crying..



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on Oct. 22 2010 at 6:31 pm
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD, Eureka, California
12 articles 4 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
— Marilyn Monroe
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left."
— Marilyn Monroe
"I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but I am not the devil. I am just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love."
— Marilyn Monroe
"Who said nights were for sleep?"
— Marilyn Monroe
"Sex is part of nature. I go along with nature."
— Marilyn Monroe

WOW just WOW i loved it i can reliate soooooooo much!!!

breezer11 GOLD said...
on Oct. 17 2010 at 8:40 pm
breezer11 GOLD, Cinci, Ohio
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wanna write a good poem? ITS AMAZING.

on Oct. 17 2010 at 6:38 pm
Dragonscribe BRONZE, West Lafayette, Indiana
4 articles 0 photos 303 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A Person's a Person no Matter how Small"
and
"A Rose by Any Other Name Would Smell as Sweet"
and
"God helps those who help themselves"

I LOVE this! The rhyming, simple as it was, really made the poem. Really excellent.

on Oct. 17 2010 at 6:11 pm
CammyLashay SILVER, Java, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Failure is not for me.

i don't understand why i feel so sad reading this poem maybe because it brings back so many memories...great work love it at that =')

on Oct. 17 2010 at 1:49 pm
SamanthaBarwick SILVER, Brunswick, Georgia
7 articles 2 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never be afraid to do something new. Remember, amateurs built the ark; professionals built the titanic.

I really like this.  The words mean so much.  I just hate it when people don't use proper punctuation and grammar, I mean come on now, you are posted something online for other people to read and vote on. I would of given you all five stars, but your to ignorant to use capital letters and correct spellings and punctuation correctly.

on Oct. 17 2010 at 1:03 am
I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
15 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible. " ~ Cadet Maxim
that's an awesome quote learn it, love it, live by it.

You will find someone soooo much better, and when you do he will probably be back. Guys suck sometimes I'm almost 15 in like a month an I choose not to date. I see no point, someone always gets hurt I'm just going to wait until it matters when someone gets hurt. Keep writting! Great job!

on Oct. 17 2010 at 12:02 am
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

wow. this totally describes my guy life...guys are so retarded...just hang in there....ha ha ha :) i really like this! :) thanks for posting ! check out my work if u get time i would love to hear ur opinion

Jordyn SILVER said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 10:43 pm
Jordyn SILVER, Sandy, Utah
7 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes when you love someone, you have to let them go."
"Don't let the fear of striking out, keep you from playing the game."

honey this is great. i know guys can suckk but its okay you will find someone wayyyyyyyyy better

on Oct. 16 2010 at 9:11 pm
Aerolin PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
34 articles 19 photos 133 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fear is only in the mind"

this is really great and sooooo true, guys suck sometimes

on Oct. 16 2010 at 8:38 pm
tHEaWESOMEoNE, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A positive attitude may not solve all your problems, but it will annoy enough people to make it worth the effort."
Herm Albright.

This is beatiful, i really liked it.

on Oct. 16 2010 at 8:23 pm
h1m_rocks BRONZE, Homestead, Florida
3 articles 9 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you're going to lead people, you have to have somewhere to go.
the motorcycle boy "rumble fish" (yes i know it's not a person quote but i like it)

nice poem!!

on Oct. 16 2010 at 6:41 pm
holly.nicole SILVER, Templeton, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's Only Awkward, If You Make It Awkward."

I really loved this is reminds me of someone.....thank you for writing this =D

WhiteShadows said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 6:29 pm
WhiteShadows, Ocala, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
You've gotta work like you don't need the money/love like you'll never be hurt/
Sing like no one is listening/ and live like it's heaven on Earth.-Anonymous

I liked this a lot. It's very sad though...:(

Dashes105 said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 2:16 pm
I love this but my favorite part would have to be "you said i love you and now im crying"




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