The Mirror

October 3, 2010
By createakristen SILVER, Corpus Christi, Texas
createakristen SILVER, Corpus Christi, Texas
5 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There isn't a person on this planet who should let a past nightmare dictate or cloud their future dreams." -CM Punk


STOP.
Who are you?
And what have you done with
The innocence that made her
So enjoyabe and unique?

You took her away with your metal heart
And let her fall apart
With every piece she had seen fall
Two pieces grew in it's place
And she got to try again.

So why can't I see my reflection?



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on Nov. 22 2013 at 4:56 pm
Animatrix SILVER, Welland, Other
5 articles 4 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up"

The begining was good and I understand how it connects in the end but only by a thin thread. Maybe you could work on making your poems connect better? You can ignore me if you want I'm really not qualified to judge. 

on Oct. 17 2010 at 6:49 pm
Dragonscribe BRONZE, West Lafayette, Indiana
4 articles 0 photos 303 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A Person's a Person no Matter how Small"
and
"A Rose by Any Other Name Would Smell as Sweet"
and
"God helps those who help themselves"

Even though I don't really understand this poem - I have a few guesses - I love how you wrote it. It's an excellent piece of writing.


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