on a positive note

October 3, 2010
By andrewbr PLATINUM, Reno, Nevada
andrewbr PLATINUM, Reno, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"ive been holding my ground so long that i cant lift my arms". -Andrew Betts-Randolph


i want to see below the surface
not just hear the paraphrase
i want to go back to the good ol days
were we lived by the suns rays
we live without delays
and we set ablaze
the predictable cliches
and our favorite song always replays
and we were just lice on a lazy dog day
living in a mid summer daze
and our body never decays
but in more than one ways
the memories never stay


The author's comments:
you can write all the negative poems you want but this write here is positve

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on Jan. 29 2012 at 1:54 am
andrewbr PLATINUM, Reno, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"ive been holding my ground so long that i cant lift my arms". -Andrew Betts-Randolph

That's what I'm saying ha

on Jun. 15 2011 at 1:57 pm
jillianatthedisco SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"People say nothing is impossible, but I do nothing every day!" -Winnie the Pooh

I actually really really like this. You're right about most poems being negative, and I appreciate the optimism in this! :)


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