Breaths for Smiling

October 3, 2010
By genesis27000 SILVER, Mexia, Texas
genesis27000 SILVER, Mexia, Texas
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Take a deep breath and smile.

For a simple moment
Everything was just great,
Your laughs, flirts, hugs and kisses
Was what I looked forward to.

Take a deep breath and smile.

I wish you would've told me
Everything I'd done wrong,
Maybe then I could've salvaged
Everything we ever had.

Take a deep breath and smile.

I caught a glimpse of what was and could've been
Everything shifts into balance.
Bitterly broken by you,
Successfully repaired by hope.

Breathe, Smile.



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on Jun. 21 2011 at 3:15 pm
genesis27000 SILVER, Mexia, Texas
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Thank you so much(: I needed a little reminder to help me remember that I liked to write. Thanks for the comment!((:

on Jun. 15 2011 at 2:04 pm
jillianatthedisco SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"People say nothing is impossible, but I do nothing every day!" -Winnie the Pooh

The repetivity is really affective.

I found myself falling more and more in love with this poem as I read on. 

You're sort of saying... paint on a smile? And how heartbreak breaks the "perfect balance." 

Three words: I feel you. 

:)


on Oct. 20 2010 at 6:46 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Whoa whoa whoa!!!! THis is so amazing! The flow is so smooth and the way you wrote this is just beautiful. Wow Geni, you don't even KNOW how much I can relate. Well I guess you do know since you wrote it :) I love you Geni, keep writing and check out some of my new stuff if you get a second. <3


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