With The Taste Of Your Lips

September 30, 2010
Ever questioning

Ever doubting

The honesty behind your eyes

Or perhaps the words you speak

Are nothing but meaningless lies

Suddenly my scattered thoughts

Are immediately dismissed

With simply the taste

Of your cherry red lips

Your chocolate brown eyes

Melting my fears

Your delicate fingers

Wiping away my tears

My cheeks burn red

My eyes stare at the ground

As you spin my world

Around and around

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applesauceHater said...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 10:23 pm
the title drew me in:)but the poem itself was good too!i love romance and intense feelings(dramas my drug)anywhoo 5/5!
SwallowedByInsanity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 9:15 pm
i'm addicted to romance novels. I write novels out of bordom, and poems out of emotions <3 haha but anyway thank u for the review! critiques are always helpful
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