L</3ve it hurts

September 30, 2010
By SnowFlakeStephyy SILVER, Bloomfield, New Jersey
SnowFlakeStephyy SILVER, Bloomfield, New Jersey
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The dirt road you left me on to perish on is as cold as ice...

Colder then the look you shot at me before you walked away...

You didn't look back...

I could hear the dry leaves cracking and breaking under your feet

It is the same sound that had hit my ears when you broke my bones

How you broke them, before you left me to rot

But NOTHING hurt me more then when you ripped my heart out and tore it up

To this day I walk the earth on that very same dirt road looking for the rest of my heart

But it's with you...


The author's comments:
I feel like this is how a lot of people feel when someone does something to hurt them. When they get used, the words I love you are easy to say hard to mean.

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on Oct. 16 2010 at 6:35 pm
SnowFlakeStephyy SILVER, Bloomfield, New Jersey
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thank you so much :)

on Oct. 16 2010 at 4:16 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

This was amazing! Fantastic! I could hear it! See it! Feel it! It gave me goose bumps it was so good...and you're right The words I love you are easy to say hard to mean. Great job




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