My Stars Twinlke

September 28, 2010
By Jhillard92 BRONZE, Carrollton, Michigan
Jhillard92 BRONZE, Carrollton, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Life is a gift; Don't let Karma stop you.

The passion set beneath thy eyes,
Resembling what lies most within thy own heart,
Color, passion, vigorously vivacious,
Controlling what we call sky,
So vast, so blue,

Beautiful in terms of dignity,
Courageous moments that create thy journey,
Marching set forward to eternity,
Vividly wild; lusciously in growth,
Set in motion through the flare of gold;
Solid steel, mixed with the true definition of life,
Soul released magnificently;
Quickly controlling thy selfs heart in love,
The bountiful word ascending our glory;
That thy causes through our beloved dreams;

Thy love for you heightened,
Extended beyond fields of the most delicate flowers;
Across the purest oceans into the valley,
Soaring amongst the tallest mountains;
Falling into the softest rain-filled white clouds,
To rest eternally, upon approaching thy night sky;

Amongst thy universe, within one breathtaking star,
A star that holds a miraculous glow,
Shining light within thy own;
Twinkling lights that follow each passive smile,
The twinkle...
Within your eyes.

The author's comments:
What inspired me to write this piece was my girlfriend. 99% of my poems I write have been love poems to show her my love. They were written in rhymes. For the first time, I tried to write publishly to show her that I love her in many ways. She's always been my inspiration, and she will continue to do so.

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dancestar GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 8:52 pm
dancestar GOLD, Westford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:

beautiful imagery! tht was great!! it is very sweet how u show ur love this way...i hope you two are very happy together and will be together forever! she is a very lucky girl :) and offcourse keep writing!


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