Forever in our Hearts

October 4, 2010
By Nerdy-Bookworm BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
Nerdy-Bookworm BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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I tried to stay strong for you
But I broke down crying
I couldn’t stand to see your face
I set the teddy bear down
And cried in my brothers arms
My world shattered when I said goodbye
My world is never gonna be the same
How could this have happened?
I seen you a week ago, but I didn’t know you would leave
I seen you crying but I couldn’t cry
Now as I stand here, tears falling from my eyes
Thoughts come to my mind
I know you went to a better place
And I know you were suffering down here
I just still can’t believe your gone
But your memories will live on in our hearts forever.

The author's comments:
This poem is dedicated to my uncle who passed away a few years ago.
And i miss him like crazy.!

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on Feb. 9 2011 at 3:30 pm
Nerdy-Bookworm BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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thanx that means alot.

 


on Jan. 16 2011 at 7:45 pm
josephdamian SILVER, Brampton,
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definently talented no doubt about that im sorry about your loss

on Nov. 12 2010 at 5:18 pm
Nerdy-Bookworm BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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thank you.

on Nov. 11 2010 at 9:47 pm
LuckyOtter SILVER, Franklinton, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
It is our choices that show who we truly are....far more than our abilities.
- Albus Dumbledore

I can completely connect with this article of poetry, my grandfather just passed away of cancer about a month ago and it is still fresh in my mind. I really do love this passage and all I haVE TO SAY IS TO KEEP WRITING.

on Oct. 15 2010 at 3:50 pm
Nerdy-Bookworm BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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thank you soo much.! its rally hard to have sum1 close 2 u leave. but we jus have 2 remember we will c them sumday

Write-4-Life said...
on Oct. 15 2010 at 2:57 pm
It feels like you released a lot of emotions, emotions I couldn't and still haven't released about the the death of a close one.  So wonderful job on such an amazing peice of work and for expressing how you felt in that situation.  This truely inspires me.

on Oct. 14 2010 at 9:57 am
Nerdy-Bookworm BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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thank you.!

jeanwolf GOLD said...
on Oct. 14 2010 at 12:38 am
jeanwolf GOLD, Lodi, California
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Favorite Quote:
Eternity is forever, falsehood is a never

this is really good.i feel for you.

take a look at some of my stuff plz



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