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The Flood of Us

October 4, 2010
By leslieswett SILVER, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
leslieswett SILVER, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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The rain is pouring,
hard,
fast.
For the first time today,
I stopped and watched,
watched as the water flooded my surroundings.
It pulling me in deep.
Deeper.
Safe,
in my head,
untouched by the flood.
Rain, rain, go away.
Its not working.
I look in the mirror,
and realize,
its not rain,
its tears.
Tears you brought me.
Of sadness,
hurt,
anger,
but also the salty tears of freedom,
as I drift out in the flood of tears.


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on Oct. 15 2010 at 5:55 pm
LunaWingsFlyAway GOLD, Farmingdale, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"And neither the angels in heaven above,Nor the demons down under the sea,Can ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee
...Of my darling-my darling-my life and my bride.In the sepulchre there by the sea."

-Edgar Allen Poe

BEAUTIFULLL!!!!!! its simple yet DEEP its great!!! i LOVE IT!!

on Oct. 13 2010 at 8:53 pm
yomaster BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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nice! simple and well written

Chelz PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 13 2010 at 11:44 am
Chelz PLATINUM, Iron Mountain, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"When life gives you lemons, bite into it and embrace the bitter taste of reality." (My own words)

very beautiful I really LIKED it!