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Falling Too Fast

September 26, 2010
By WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you're alive, it isn't.”
"Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw."
"Words and hea


I’m falling down, down, down,
Into the deep abyss of misery,
That engulfs our world.
Flailing and thrashing for something,
Anything to grab and save me,
From my awaiting fate.
But nothing is there to rescue me,
No one is there to help,
Me along the way.
I fell down the whole without warning,
I had wanted to explore it, not
Lose myself in it.
All little girls creep closer and closer,
Tiptoeing near the unknown,
Near our future.
Then out of nowhere we fall,
Like Alice in Wonderland,
Down the hole.
Suddenly we are getting older,
Becoming more mature,
And we can’t stop.
No matter how much I pray, how hard I try,
It won’t stop, won’t freeze, I am,
Slowly dying.


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on Nov. 6 2010 at 4:55 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

Thats a matter of opinion. But we could argue on this point forever. And as for,[whoever I am] I aparently am somone who is destend to disagree with most everything you say.

on Nov. 6 2010 at 4:32 pm
HaleyBree BRONZE, Seneca, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth is, everyone is going to hurt you. You just got to find the ones worth suffering for."
-Bob Marley♥

I agree wit u ash.

And whoever u are, the figure of speech, doesnt mean shes feelin sorry for herself!


on Nov. 5 2010 at 4:05 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

A lot, prickly pear! But not that.

on Nov. 5 2010 at 3:08 pm
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you're alive, it isn't.”
"Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw."
"Words and hea

Well considering your spelling... Who knows what else you could miss!

on Nov. 5 2010 at 2:49 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

Well hevaven help us! do you think I mised that?

on Nov. 5 2010 at 1:39 pm
HaleyBree BRONZE, Seneca, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth is, everyone is going to hurt you. You just got to find the ones worth suffering for."
-Bob Marley♥

FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!, its a figure of speech!,

on Nov. 4 2010 at 9:34 am
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

Your not dying! For mercy's sake, your feeling sorry for yourself.