What Does She Feel?

September 26, 2010
She is the party of the group
she makes you laugh with her favorite line
she says yes when she really means no
she gives her heart to you always

she listens to your stories,ups&downs
but who listens to her
she tries her best to stay positive but her past wont let her.

All day she is laughing, but at night the past comes to haunt her and sometimes
i have to cry at night.

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Zoya_Khan said...
Dec. 23, 2012 at 3:23 am
Nice :) :) :)
snaomi This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 5:26 pm
I really really like the end of this poem. The change of narrator at the end is great. I feel like the beginning could be tightened a bit to reflect the end. Maybe search for stronger verbs at the beginning to help propel the poem
sweettThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 7:42 pm
Thanx... and thank you for the advice :)
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