THIS ROOM

September 29, 2010
By davidm. GOLD, McGraws, West Virginia
davidm. GOLD, McGraws, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
karma what you do happens to you


In this room no one hear the screams,no one hears the tears.
This room is hidden so well that no one can find it.
This room isn't a simple broom closet.
It's more its a place that no one can go to, no one can see it, and no one can hear within but me.
This place is the best place in the universe; this place is worse place in the world.
I have but one name for this glorious place, and that is my imagination.
My mind is this place, because within my mind no one can control me and no one can help me.
In my mind I slowly die due to the tears overflowing within.
I drown within myself, emotions flowing like a tsunami engulfing this little strand of reality I have left.
You may call me crazy, and I can't disagree with you either.



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on Oct. 12 2010 at 12:50 pm
FireWhiskey SILVER, Durango, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Dreams are only Dreams, unless you do something about them, than they're life"
~By me

Harsh but the clever truth. A connection shared by many including myself

on Oct. 11 2010 at 9:33 pm
Jellybean9898 PLATINUM, Glendale, California
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Favorite Quote:
"When nothing goes right, go left"-Anonymous
"Thank God men cannot fly, and lay waste to the sky as well as the Earth"-Henry David Thoreau

clever.  pls check out my work if you get the chance?  thx.  good job, btw.  liked it.

katiedawn12 said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 1:46 pm
david, i love your poems! you just have always had a way with words.

on Oct. 11 2010 at 10:23 am
TheEdgar PLATINUM, Fayetteville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"If you are in need of forgetting something, make a note to remember it."

Your mind can be a horrible nightmare. Good description.

lovely 101 said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 4:45 pm
i love what u wrote cause i did know someone like that and that realy meant she thing to me to help me

on Oct. 10 2010 at 1:27 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

this is really good! i love how you end it. "i cant disagree with you either."

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. great job on this. keep writing!


on Oct. 9 2010 at 9:13 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

this is really awesome captain. i love the last line.i also love how you do your dance.

on Oct. 9 2010 at 9:10 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

this is really awesome captan. i love the last line.i also love how you do your dance.

on Oct. 9 2010 at 7:44 pm
Hummingbird GOLD, Berryton, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Life is either a daring adventure or nothing. -Helen Keller

Wow- this poem was very original and I can tell it came from within the heart. I wrote something that I feel is similar to this. If you would like to, check it out. It is called The Visit. I would appreciate it. Glad that there is someone out there I can relate to. Great job!


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