romeo and me

September 29, 2010
By leeabeea BRONZE, Shelton, Washington
leeabeea BRONZE, Shelton, Washington
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The day went by, the sun set down and yet the only thing that matters is you. I watched you leave, a horor to my eyes sitting at my widow crying silent cries. Night has past and greatness to be, but now I feel as if i've lost everything. The sorrow won't stop and the tears come out and suddenly your here. your starring at me with those eyes, oh those eyes i can't resist, deep and brown with every bit of love, but you had to ruin it! Didn't you? Sending your false love my way just for me to see that maybe, just maybe... love doesn't exist! The sorrow is now greater then ever and i am through, i am done with you, romeo.

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lovely101 said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 4:50 pm
wat made u write that is so lovely u r truly talanted

on Oct. 10 2010 at 1:28 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

wow this was so well written! you are a great writer

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