My Neusiance.

September 29, 2010
By SaltwaterRoom PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
SaltwaterRoom PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you do will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it."

You rattle my cage
You're a thorn in my side
through all the time passed
My bitterness won't hide
It surfaces in the shadows
And wallows in my heart
flowing of my thoughts
From the never ending start
I'm not sure I'm quite finished
Feeling sorry for myself
It's hard to think that all you are
Is a memory on my shelf
So all I can do is wait
For the wounds completely to heal
Though my hope is quite a fantasy
The scars are always real

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on Oct. 11 2010 at 5:44 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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i love this captain. i like the rhyming scheme and the concept and i love the last two lines. do your dance captain.

on Oct. 10 2010 at 1:29 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

wow, the end was so intense. i really liked this piece because i can feel your emotions through every word.  you are a great writer

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. keep writing

on Oct. 9 2010 at 11:18 pm
summer.x BRONZE, Singapore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadows."

"Life isnt about how many breaths you take... its about the moments that take you're breath away."

this is really good!

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