My Neusiance.

You rattle my cage
You're a thorn in my side
through all the time passed
My bitterness won't hide
It surfaces in the shadows
And wallows in my heart
flowing of my thoughts
From the never ending start
I'm not sure I'm quite finished
Feeling sorry for myself
It's hard to think that all you are
Is a memory on my shelf
So all I can do is wait
For the wounds completely to heal
Though my hope is quite a fantasy
The scars are always real





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 5:44 pm
i love this captain. i like the rhyming scheme and the concept and i love the last two lines. do your dance captain.
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 1:29 pm

wow, the end was so intense. i really liked this piece because i can feel your emotions through every word.  you are a great writer

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. keep writing

 
summer123 said...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 11:18 pm
this is really good!
 
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