D0awn's Promise

September 29, 2010
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Dew drops twinkling like diamonds
Shook with the wind
But clutched determinedly to a lacey web
That veiled the blooming bush of scarlet,
Velvet petaled roses and shivered
In sync with the rest of the world as the
Cold dawn atmosphere fades
A ghostly reminder of the bitter night

The light blue sky shy with spots of soft pink
Covers the nightly stars like a blanket
Golden rays of sunlight
Leak into the darkest crevices
Waking whatever lie in their paths
With a bath of glorious warmth
A radiant promise of day

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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 1:34 pm

this is so good! you are such a great writer. i love the visual here. you are really good at creating a stunning scene.

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. keep writing

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