Sinners

September 29, 2010
Bright orange skyline,
Lighting up the night.
Laying on your shoulder
Not a worry in my sight.
Cool breeze flows across
Bright rosy faces.
Seeing everything in your eyes,
Your smile my heart embraces.
Holding you close to me.
Feeling you skin on skin.
Kiss your neck,
Feel your breath,
Here we start to sin.





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 5:55 pm
i like this captain. i love the rhyming scheme and the last line. i really wish dell support center would stop trying to load. fait ta danse.
 
...Katelynn... replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 5:56 pm
Thank you so much, I really do appreciate it. :)
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 6:00 pm
ofcourse me dear honeysicle. please do join us on the pie. do your dance.
 
...Katelynn... replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 6:02 pm
Of course, darling.
 
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