September 29, 2010
By Mina4Eva GOLD, Ransomville, New York
Mina4Eva GOLD, Ransomville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The birds wings sprouted from the two halves of the mans broken heart" ~ Enna Burning ~

you said the worst you could
crushing me from the inside out
i didnt feel the pain
and still havent yet
all i seem to feel is hate
i thought i loved you
but it was never true
because i truly hate you
with everything i have to give
i gave you most of what i had
now i'm stnding here
surrounded by broken glass
that shattered with your last chance
you blew it leaving wrekage in your path
but the pieces are already being picked up
with only a few lonely shards
left in the wake to remember this day
if not to say
"you missed out but i can live with that"

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on Oct. 11 2010 at 5:14 pm
Hummingbird GOLD, Berryton, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Life is either a daring adventure or nothing. -Helen Keller

I can just feel the emotion pouring out of this beatiful poem. Hatred. Very strong. Good job!

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on Oct. 10 2010 at 1:38 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

wow, this is really brilliant. you are a fantastic writer. i LOVE this piece

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. keep writing!


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