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September 29, 2010
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you said the worst you could
crushing me from the inside out
i didnt feel the pain
and still havent yet
all i seem to feel is hate
i thought i loved you
but it was never true
because i truly hate you
with everything i have to give
i gave you most of what i had
now i'm stnding here
surrounded by broken glass
that shattered with your last chance
you blew it leaving wrekage in your path
but the pieces are already being picked up
with only a few lonely shards
left in the wake to remember this day
if not to say
"you missed out but i can live with that"





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Hummingbird This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 5:14 pm

I can just feel the emotion pouring out of this beatiful poem. Hatred. Very strong. Good job!

if you have a chance, rate or comment on some of my work-it means a bunch!

 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 1:38 pm

wow, this is really brilliant. you are a fantastic writer. i LOVE this piece

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. keep writing!

 
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