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You remind me of the past
That I’ve been trying to forget
Your shadow is dark and vast
But you keep holding on
Like a leech to my skin
Sucking the blood from my veins
Keeping me trapped in what was,
And what has already been

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sydni said...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 7:52 am
you might have just made me the happiest person! you dont know how much that even means to me! =)
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Oct. 11, 2010 at 6:10 pm
i think its fine just the way it is.when you say its not long enough consider this captain, some of the best poems are like 4 lines long, and it makes these suckers go wild. nobody wants to read twenty lines about nothing.do your dance captain.
trblue said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 10:10 am

i really love your poem and it's everything im trying to be right now. not letting my past hold me and...

i really love your poem.  :)

sydni replied...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 10:47 am
thank you=)! i'm always nervous my poems aren't good enough
trblue said...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 8:16 pm

i feel like it could be more, but its fine just the way it is. it reminds me of my crush im trying to forget him, but i see him every day i go to school + he has a twin. so this poem is everything i want to be not letting my past control me.


i would like to tell u im gone print this out and look @ it everyday. so thank you.

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