4 elements of the world

September 29, 2010
By Taya11 SILVER, Park City, Utah
Taya11 SILVER, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
I was wondering why the ball kept coming closer to me, then it me.


Fire Burns
Rain bites
Wind howls
and Earth roars

North meets ease
South meets west
East meets south
and West meets north

Peace is a grin
Love is a kiss
happiness is laughter
joy a fleeting smile



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on Oct. 11 2010 at 4:41 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I love the orderly structure of this poem, and yet it retained its creativity. I found that the first four lines were my favorite. But the overall effect was brilliant, of course.

Well done.



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