Whay you have done

October 6, 2010
By RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.


I was an outcast
A heart amongst the spades
But you made me an insider
Another bird in the flock
You told me when to turn the other way
That sometime it will be my day
My days were long stained with depression
But now I can turn the clock
Morning to night
Evening to afternoon
My heart to be no longer desolate as a moon
I found where I am meant to be
Finally together with my family
Being with you is always fun
Now you know what you have done


The author's comments:
This is a about how my best friend took me in when i was in my darkest state

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RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 1:11 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

If anybody could give me some constructive criticism that would be epic. I want to get better as a poet in the making and the only way to do that is to be critqued

RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 6:39 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

Thanks! ^.^

amsscoobydoo said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 6:07 pm
Thats pretty good...i never knew you could write good like that

RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 7:14 am
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

Thanks man

RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 7:10 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

:D ^.^ thats uber epic

 


on Oct. 11 2010 at 7:05 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

hahah nooo. those compliments were definitely sincere!

RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 7:01 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

Its like a program that post stuff or does stuff 4 u without u doing any work.Alot of people use it for advertisement but ur not now i know that so thanks :D

on Oct. 11 2010 at 6:46 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

whats a bot?

RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 6:26 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

I cant tell if your a bot or not but thanks! :D
Status= Happy Camper! 

on Oct. 11 2010 at 6:01 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

this is so good! i absolutely loved it. you are such a great writer and i love reading your work.

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. great job. keep writing!


on Oct. 11 2010 at 3:36 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

nobodys chastizing you captain. do your dance.

RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 12:59 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

Thanks alot. You have no clue how much that meant to me

on Oct. 10 2010 at 10:45 pm
ModestMusic BRONZE, San Clemente, California
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We treat mishaps like sinking ships, and I know that Iwouldn't want to be put out to drift"

You poetry is already fairly epic!! Good work!

RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 7:05 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

T.T just realized I misspelled what in the title

on Oct. 10 2010 at 8:31 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I'm waiting for you captain, not that i fully understand what the word epic means but...i get the idea.

RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 2:46 am
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

Thanks. My poetry will soon become epic with practice.

on Oct. 9 2010 at 9:15 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

funny, i was waiting  for something like "i'm dead, thanks alot." i guess now you see what poetry made me. eitherway, i still love it captain.do your dance.

trblue GOLD said...
on Oct. 8 2010 at 8:08 pm
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
14 articles 7 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "

your AN was no need.

i could tell from your word choice

that your were take in @ your

darkest moment. i like your line 2



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