When I Look at You

September 30, 2010
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When I look at you
I feel tense inside
When i look at you
I see my other half
When i look at you
I realize...
Your the one who changed me
your the one who made me better
When i look at you
i get lost in your eyes
When i look at you
We combine as one
When i look at you
i see the truth
when i look at you
It makes me proud to have someone like you





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kmarie14 said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 6:32 pm
awwwwwwv(: sooo cute :) really a beautiful poem keep writing! check out some of my work?
 
ShootingStarz replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 6:41 pm
thanks a billion! i am new at this so i need as much feedback as possible. thanks for checking out my poem
 
kmarie14 replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 11:33 pm
ANYTIME ;) ya i know how you feel! :P keep writing and posting!
 
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