When I Look at You

September 30, 2010
By ShootingStarz GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
ShootingStarz GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
14 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When nothing goes right, go left"


When I look at you
I feel tense inside
When i look at you
I see my other half
When i look at you
I realize...
Your the one who changed me
your the one who made me better
When i look at you
i get lost in your eyes
When i look at you
We combine as one
When i look at you
i see the truth
when i look at you
It makes me proud to have someone like you


The author's comments:
This is about someone special who i truely care about. Just what came to mind while thinking about this person

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on Oct. 11 2010 at 11:33 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

ANYTIME ;) ya i know how you feel! :P keep writing and posting!

on Oct. 11 2010 at 6:41 pm
ShootingStarz GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
14 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When nothing goes right, go left"

thanks a billion! i am new at this so i need as much feedback as possible. thanks for checking out my poem

on Oct. 10 2010 at 6:32 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

awwwwwwv(: sooo cute :) really a beautiful poem keep writing! check out some of my work?


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