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The people are flooding in,
comming in great big waterfalls,
and gathering in puddles.
when they go away later today.
ill get to go home,
oh how i long to be alone......





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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 7:10 pm
I, as well, liked this poem very much. This was partly because I can identify so well with the feeling, but also (of course) because it is written so well. I like how you described the patterns of people (in puddles and waterfalls). Well done!
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 7:10 pm
I'd be delighted if you would read one of my poems.
 
BriBear replied...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 9:54 pm

i will happily read some of ur poems...

i thank u very much! :) i had to do this for a school project and i felt that it ws one of my favorites :)

 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 7:00 pm

wow, you are SUCH a strong writer. shortening this poem made every word a prize, and it definitely was.

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing

 
BriBear replied...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 3:12 pm
thank u so much. :) i never thought someone would actually ay that about my writing. ill check out yours definatly
 
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