alone

September 12, 2010
By BriBear BRONZE, LaFayette, Georgia
BriBear BRONZE, LaFayette, Georgia
4 articles 18 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
If i was perfect they'd have to redifine the words


The people are flooding in,
comming in great big waterfalls,
and gathering in puddles.
when they go away later today.
ill get to go home,
oh how i long to be alone......



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BriBear BRONZE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 9:54 pm
BriBear BRONZE, LaFayette, Georgia
4 articles 18 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
If i was perfect they'd have to redifine the words

i will happily read some of ur poems...

i thank u very much! :) i had to do this for a school project and i felt that it ws one of my favorites :)


on Oct. 5 2010 at 7:10 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I'd be delighted if you would read one of my poems.

on Oct. 5 2010 at 7:10 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I, as well, liked this poem very much. This was partly because I can identify so well with the feeling, but also (of course) because it is written so well. I like how you described the patterns of people (in puddles and waterfalls). Well done!

BriBear BRONZE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 3:12 pm
BriBear BRONZE, LaFayette, Georgia
4 articles 18 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
If i was perfect they'd have to redifine the words

thank u so much. :) i never thought someone would actually ay that about my writing. ill check out yours definatly

on Oct. 4 2010 at 7:00 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

wow, you are SUCH a strong writer. shortening this poem made every word a prize, and it definitely was.

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing





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