September 12, 2010
Sorrow is found, love is lost.
Happiness fades, as fear grows.
Hatred rises and the darkness comes.
There's no way, reaching for my savior.
Lifeless, I bleed......fading.
Fading more and more...I am lost...

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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 8:43 pm

wow...this is such an intense poem yet so well written. dont ever stop!

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. great job on this!

darkemogirl666 replied...
Dec. 7, 2010 at 10:58 am
Thank you. It didn't take much to write this poem.
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