Love Suicide

September 11, 2010
If a rose do prick me,
Can it be bandaged?
The blood is like love,
I try to manage.

It flows,trickles,and drops.
Let me take hold
Please, just STOP!

The gauze holds together,
all the thoughts wrapped inside.
What I've experienced is,
Love suicide.





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pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 1:47 pm
this is really good...i love the last line, it really hits home. perfect.
 
johnnyg3 replied...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 2:33 pm
thank you :)
 
drowning-in-sorrow said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 8:37 pm
This is a really good poem. I love every line.
 
johnnyg3 replied...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 2:34 pm
thank you :)
 
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