my shadow

September 24, 2010
what is my shadow?
my conscience? my death?
or is it none of these things?
is it the deep depths of my black heart?
following me. following me?
or is it not even that?
is it nothing, made up by the mind?
to amuse, and abuse?
no you may say,
for you are like me,
for us only we, believe,
that the shadow is but darkness,
for all to see.
and you will be you,
and i will be me.
and others ask why we must even be.
but to fit out,
is that bad?
for that we may never know,
like we may never know,
what is my shadow?





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LizzyMarie21 said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 12:52 am
wow, this is amzing, keep up the good work =]
 
kmarie17 said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 11:09 pm
I just flat out love this! I think the whole idea behind it is so creative! Amazing! (: please check out my work if u get time ;) keep writin ur amazing at it!
 
drowning-in-sorrow said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 9:23 pm
I really like this. Good job.
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 6:51 pm

i really like this!! you are such a good writer.

rate/comment on some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this. keep writing!

 
lizzzy replied...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 7:56 pm
thaks so much!
 
LifesDifficultMoments replied...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 10:57 am
I really like this poem. Most don't like how t doesn't have punctuation, but there is a world famous poet that was famous for his poems and how he doesn't capitalize any letters. But forget them if they comment you are very original. Love the poem!
 
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