you hold me down with a chain

September 22, 2010
By pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.


one single heart
could tear us apart
you hold me down with a chain
so i dont cause you pain
just let me be
i want to be free.



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on Oct. 11 2010 at 10:16 am
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

oh my god thank you so much! your comments mean the world to me and it makes me feel so great when someone comments on my work! dont be sorry for commenting, it makes me so happy!!! :D lol

on Oct. 10 2010 at 2:45 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
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It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

This is incredible! I love that you can write such meanginful poems in so few lines. And sorry for commenting so much on your work, but I just LOVE your writing! :)


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