you hold me down with a chain

one single heart
could tear us apart
you hold me down with a chain
so i dont cause you pain
just let me be
i want to be free.





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WritingLoverForever said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 2:45 pm
This is incredible! I love that you can write such meanginful poems in so few lines. And sorry for commenting so much on your work, but I just LOVE your writing! :)
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 10:16 am
oh my god thank you so much! your comments mean the world to me and it makes me feel so great when someone comments on my work! dont be sorry for commenting, it makes me so happy!!! :D lol
 
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