No one

September 22, 2010

I sit in the corner
No one notices me
I won’t open this door
It is locked and I lost the key
No one cares about me
The key is love
Of which I have lost hope
No one loves me
If you have found my key unlock my door and come in
Hope will be found when my door is open and love pours in
Maybe you love me

The author's comments:
Sorry if this sounded really emotional but it just popped into my head one day and I wrote it down

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on Oct. 6 2010 at 9:19 pm
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Yeah when writting this I thought they were a bit long as well how would you suggest I fix that? I am open to any and all suggestions.

on Oct. 6 2010 at 9:15 pm
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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And Will may I ask what idiom that is? Oh and thanks for the comment.

on Oct. 5 2010 at 2:26 pm
MidnightWriter SILVER, Ontario, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Writers are a less dangerous version of the career criminal. Everywhere they go, they see the potential for the perfect crime. The difference is that writers have better self control.

The third last and second last lines seem a little long, but I like the idea of the poem.

We-R-3 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 1:48 pm
We-R-3 BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
A picture is worth a thousand words, however it takes a real artist to turn words into pictures.

Have you heard about the new Lebron Iphone, you have to set it on vibrate because it doesn't have any rings

I like it, it has an interesting way of expressing a common idiom. applause.

on Oct. 5 2010 at 1:21 pm
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Thanks D :)

on Oct. 5 2010 at 9:02 am
SilentSerenity BRONZE, Brookfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"A word to the wise isn't nessesary, its the stupid ones that need the advice."
Bill Cosby

Very Nice Maggs. :)

on Oct. 5 2010 at 8:31 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Thanks sis love ya

Nikkaa-Boom said...
on Oct. 4 2010 at 7:09 pm
Nikkaa-Boom, Bidwell, Ohio
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-Claps- I love it! Good job sis! (:




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