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No one

I sit in the corner
No one notices me
I won’t open this door
It is locked and I lost the key
No one cares about me
The key is love
Of which I have lost hope
No one loves me
If you have found my key unlock my door and come in
Hope will be found when my door is open and love pours in
Maybe you love me



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CanadianRose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 2:26 pm:
The third last and second last lines seem a little long, but I like the idea of the poem.
 
The_Princess_of_Moronica replied...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 9:19 pm :
Yeah when writting this I thought they were a bit long as well how would you suggest I fix that? I am open to any and all suggestions.
 
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Itwasamurder...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 1:48 pm:
I like it, it has an interesting way of expressing a common idiom. applause.
 
The_Princess_of_Moronica replied...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 9:15 pm :
And Will may I ask what idiom that is? Oh and thanks for the comment.
 
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SilentSerenity said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 9:02 am:
Very Nice Maggs. :)
 
The_Princess_of_Moronica replied...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 1:21 pm :
Thanks D :)
 
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Nikkaa-Boom said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 7:09 pm:
-Claps- I love it! Good job sis! (:
 
The_Princess_of_Moronica replied...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 8:31 am :
Thanks sis love ya
 
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