Feeling Alive

September 22, 2010
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I lay down in a wooden bed
No beddings, no pillow, just wood.
I can’t see light above me
I can’t breathe, I can’t move
I can’t do anything but,
I can feel people crying above me
I can feel their tears.
Dropping one by one on the ground their loneliness and fears.
Flowers thrown on my face as I go down…
Down in the ground
Down to a new place
Down to somewhere everyone’s going to be at one day.
Prayers are made.
Wishes are wished.
And goodbyes are goodbyes.

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AoiJ671 said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 5:21 am

hehehe, I finally found you ellen! and might I say, your work is excellent ^^ as for mine... *sigh* >.> I still need work...I need to regain my writing skills but as I can see you have talent. I didn't even know you had a novel or story that you were working on. It's pretty good ^^

Hey, we should start a forum for Guam Writers! O.O It be like a get together for aspiring authors and poets alike and we can give tips to one another ^^ How does that sound? It's just an idea...

AoiJ671 replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 5:22 am
*but please consider it...
EllenP. replied...
Jan. 31, 2011 at 5:37 pm
wassap jessica. dont they already have some sort of club the magazine club. the one where carlo is the president...we'll start our own! wahahaha. :D let's ask Pickelsimer! ^_^
AoiJ671 replied...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 4:23 am
kk but its not really like carlo's own...his own is a club da makes a magazine but this forum is rather free and doesn't have much requirements and we share ideas and try to get ourselves noticed in the world besides just okkodo high school
EllenP. replied...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 11:15 pm
ooooo... now that u guys are done with the competition, let's talk to Ms. Pickelsimer about it!
LOVEJ said...
Oct. 25, 2010 at 5:15 am
this is one of ur best work. the way u did ur title was great...feeling alive but the story was about death...Love it.
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