Star Wars: A Jedi still remains

September 23, 2010
By IAmTheJesusFreak SILVER, Chambersburg, Pennsylvania
IAmTheJesusFreak SILVER, Chambersburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 20:9
But if I say, I will not mention him (God) or speak any more in his name, his word is in my heart like a fire, a fire shut up in my bones. I am weary in holding it in, indeed I cannot.


Evil red eyes stare out
From a concealing Sith cloak
Of a fallen Jedi.
No hope left in those dead,
Unblinking eyes.
Only hatred and a longing to kill
Seem to remain
In his eerie gaze.
People cower at the mention of his name,
The ground seems to tremble in the presence of him,
The earth he trods turns to ashes in silence,
The mere sight of him kills
Any living peace inside,
But looking past
The mysterious set eyes,
And the dark red lightsaber,
A glimmer of sadness flickers in his menacing eyes,
A sadness of a lost hope
That once sparked life into his soul,
Oh, how much regret
Flashes in those somber orbs,
Yet, in the seemingly vile and wretched
Heart of the Sith Lord,
In the very depths of
Anakin Skywalker’s soul,
A Jedi still remains


The author's comments:
I love Star Wars and I couldn't go to sleep one night until I wrote it.

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on Oct. 6 2010 at 1:57 pm
IAmTheJesusFreak SILVER, Chambersburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 20:9
But if I say, I will not mention him (God) or speak any more in his name, his word is in my heart like a fire, a fire shut up in my bones. I am weary in holding it in, indeed I cannot.

I love Star Wars, and one night I had this poem going through my mind. I just had to write it down. Thanks for the awsome encouragement! Glad you enjoyed it!

on Oct. 5 2010 at 4:39 pm
emergingtalent SILVER, Riverton, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and say what you feel, Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter won't mind. -Dr. Seuss

I loved this! I am a Star Wars freak! FIVE STARS!


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