Short and Sweet Ballad of Romance

September 25, 2010
By lolcopter GOLD, Santa Maria, California
lolcopter GOLD, Santa Maria, California
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Favorite Quote:
"it's kind of bad, when the words you write, kind of turn themselves into knives."


don't abandon me here, all alone. i was
solitary, with an empty house for a home.
i've seen you cry, and you make me smile.
won't you please stay for awhile?
don't abandon me here, all alone. i was
solitary, with an empty heart for a home.
my hand belongs in yours; here, take it, please do.
this house, this heart was empty because i couldn't find you.



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lolcopter GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2010 at 12:46 pm
lolcopter GOLD, Santa Maria, California
14 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"it's kind of bad, when the words you write, kind of turn themselves into knives."

THANKS :) I hope you enjoyed it.

on Oct. 3 2010 at 7:39 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Wow, this poem was exactly what the title described (I loved the title by the way). I like the way that this is written, almost like a plea. It's very touching, in a slightly desperate kind of way. :) Well done, m'dear.


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