The Woods

September 24, 2010
By riverstreambrooke SILVER, Canton, Connecticut
riverstreambrooke SILVER, Canton, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"make it a great day!" -Mason Beekley
"what happened to our future? 'cause i can see it in the rearview." -gary go

The woods are not
Not even under a sheet of speckled black,
where trees sleep
fractured skeletons.

We cry together
the trees and me.
Tea party of tears
sipped from porcelain.
The trees my quiet wooden
My roots reach deep
soil deep
so deep i'm healed.

If the woods are lonely i'm

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This article has 2 comments.

on Oct. 3 2010 at 8:06 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This is a wonderful poem. I've used that word a lot, but I really mean it with this piece. I love how you gave character to the forest. I especially liked the eight and ningth lines. This is creative, and very beautiful. Thanks for telling me a story of poetry.

Casper1 GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2010 at 10:48 pm
Casper1 GOLD, Wytheville, Virginia
12 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Nobody can hurt me without my permission." --Gandhi, " Light, the visible reminder of invisible light"- T.S Eliot, "God made the dark so we could see the light"- five girls.

i like this alot. it has alot of emotion and sadness in it.  its good


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