Missing Pieces

September 17, 2010
By madisong321 BRONZE, Albany, New York
madisong321 BRONZE, Albany, New York
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Your
is like a puzzle









Heart
Over time pieces are











Added
Some are

away








Taken


Some go missing










Then
My heart
now has been missing one piece





Years
That piece has left me
a dad






Without
No eye contact, no

of words




Exchanging
Nothing. Just wonder, wondering will this
change

Ever
And when
this ever change.







Will
So that my
will be filled.






Heart
With no
, no openings.









Gaps
No

pieces.









Missing



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on Oct. 4 2010 at 1:10 am
Spazzmine BRONZE, Foley, Alabama
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"Some of the greater things in life are unseen thats why you close your eyes when you kiss, cry, or dream... "Anonymous.

Your welcome :}

on Oct. 3 2010 at 7:20 pm
madisong321 BRONZE, Albany, New York
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Thanks! It doesn't look like that usually, but thank you!!;)

on Oct. 3 2010 at 3:45 am
Spazzmine BRONZE, Foley, Alabama
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"Some of the greater things in life are unseen thats why you close your eyes when you kiss, cry, or dream... "Anonymous.

Interesting writting technique.


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