It's just Fake

September 20, 2010
By J.Dawson GOLD, Connersville, Indiana
J.Dawson GOLD, Connersville, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you. You hurt me again and again, but I love you"-Reality Bites

You win
What do you get
Satisfaction of my regret
Everytime I touched your lips
Your mind was playing sickening tricks
Each time I held you close
It wasn't me you wanted most
No, it was the pain
Part of your game
To rip me to shreds
And strip me of my name
Of my own blame
But why me
I've done nothing wrong
I saw that you were hurt
And wrote you a song
I loved you dearly
Promised you my name
Gave you a ring
Said that it was me to blame
You told me to keep my word
And then you left
Last I heard
You're involved with him
But still I keep my word
For this promise I can not break
Because yes, I still love you
Even if the love you showed me
Was fake

The author's comments:
Mind games hurt

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on Oct. 1 2010 at 2:22 pm
MidnightWriter SILVER, Ontario, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Writers are a less dangerous version of the career criminal. Everywhere they go, they see the potential for the perfect crime. The difference is that writers have better self control.

Nicely written. It kept my intrest all the way through (If a poem is boring I stop reading)

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