Edward vs. Jacob

September 16, 2010
both say I'm a dork
both say I'm smart
both are playing a game
to win my heart

both have traits
that make me shiver
making my heart beat
alot quicker

one is passionate
about basketball
he is truly remarkable
and tall

the other is a hardworker
willing to commit
he never stops
or never quits

but they both have bad traits
that hurt me so bad
they've both made me cry
and made me sad

one focuses on his passion
and ignores me sometimes
I never know what to say
about what's on his mind

the other likes to
go out and live his life
with wild weekends
and crazy nights

I don't know what to do
what's wrong and right
if I should continue this
or move on with my life

who ever wants to win
or who will lose
I will never know
who to choose

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kmarie17 said...
Oct. 3, 2010 at 9:26 pm
I love the allusion to twilight...it really fits, and the poem its self is outstanding! As for the choice go for the guy who will truly make you happy in the long run good luck! :) keep writing and check out my work!
socrprncss12 replied...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 8:01 pm
yeah i thought it was really ironic because one guy's name is edelmiro aka edward and the other guy is juan aka jacob. edelmiro is the all around romantic guy but wishes not to break my heart like edward in new moon when he leaves bella. jacob is exactly like juan who is the perfect bestfriend but when he liked me, i talkin to edelmiro. as of rite now, i still dont know who to choose but my heart goes more to juan.
kmarie17 replied...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 11:14 pm
Thats insanely ironic! (: just let it play out is my advice if you end up dating them both in the long run then thats just what happens! I really do like this peom! please check out my work if you get time i would love to hear ur opinion! (:
socrprncss12 replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 6:11 pm
its been awhile and eventually things worked out for the better of myself. i did not choose any one of them but its nice because they have both became really good friends
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