Undying Love

September 16, 2010
By iwillalwaysbemyself PLATINUM, Murphy, North Carolina
iwillalwaysbemyself PLATINUM, Murphy, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
dream as if you'll live forever, Do as if you'll die tomorrow


She smiled up at him,
A gleam in her eyes.
He caressed her cheek with his
Hand, as he moved her hair from in front of her eyes.
He took her breath away,
In every kind of way.
Gaze upon the glorious heavens.
Broken was he, as he
Mourned his dying love.
Cloudy, is what the sky became,
As the cherished girl lay there quickly dying.
Scream at the unfair heavens,
For taking her away.
Vow revenge to the gods,
For what they did.
Bury the gracious girl,
In the field where she loved to be.
Fall to the ground, next to
Her lifeless body.
Flee the sorrow filled field.
Hunt down the murdering creature.
Seize the bloodthirsty
Monster.
Stab it with the blazing
Sword.
Walk away from the dead
Snakelike creature.
Crumble to the ground, holding
His bleeding stomach.
Clutch his broken heart, fallen
To the ground, dead with his love.


The author's comments:
this is like a fairy tale. I'm hoping some people understand that there is someone out there for them that would actually do this kind of thing for them.

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on Oct. 4 2010 at 11:00 am
iwillalwaysbemyself PLATINUM, Murphy, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
dream as if you'll live forever, Do as if you'll die tomorrow

i didnt realize that until now

on Oct. 1 2010 at 8:05 pm
MaddieWo PLATINUM, Marstons Mills, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"If I'd a knowed more, I would a loved more." -Pilate Dead, Song of Solomon

The structure of the last part is amazing :o Like you say something, next line 1 word, say something, 2 words, etc. I dunno if you meant to :p

Love it :D



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