The only one

September 15, 2010
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"


All the color in the world
Couldn't match the color in your eyes
The green of the trees
And the blue of the skies
None of it compares to you
You could bring them to their knees
You glow brighter than the sun
And through my eyes
You are...


The author's comments:
The only one:)
For all the girls I've ever liked;)

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on Mar. 1 2011 at 11:44 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

Thanks:)  I appreciate that you went through to read some of them:)

on Feb. 28 2011 at 8:28 pm
trisaratops SILVER, Eatonville, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"The feeling of being 'okay' does not imply that the person has risen above all their faults and emotional problems. It merely implies that they refuse to be paralyzed by them."

I really like your writing style.
Your poems are well written.

on Nov. 25 2010 at 6:58 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

Thanks:)  I went through this phase where I wrote some really really happy, light poetry.  Some really light stuff compared to what I would normally write.

on Nov. 25 2010 at 4:27 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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I loved this one. Great rhymes and the way you put them together.




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