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September 15, 2010
By derrick_boysen BRONZE, Sanibel, Florida
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The day is dark and sort of gloomy
Clouds are grey a storm is blooming
Very comfy as I lie in bed
I begin to daydream in my head
Of a growing warmth deep inside
Of a tingling feeling up my spine
This dream is real I know this true
For when I opened my eyes I saw you

© Chelsea H., Carlsbad, CA

The author's comments:
this was inspired by my girlfriend, and my overwhelming love for her, i feel so comfortable with her, and this is a feeling i want others to feel as well, possibly while reading this poem
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