September 18, 2010
By Jacktheskeleton SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
Jacktheskeleton SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
The man who is the wealthiest isn't he whom posses the most money, but he who has the knowledge to realize that life is more than riches and materialistic things. (lmao..i so made that up and made it with big word's so it sounds like an original quote.)

I used to think that love

Was something only sent from the heavens above

But screwed was i to think

That anyone would ever jump at the brink

To save a damned soul

One who has lost all sense of control

Why have I been so dumb?

Trying to hide all other feeling but happiness numb

Damned was I to feel

To think that something you said was ever real

Damned are those who loose

Who give up on life and move on to boose

Damned are those who care

They give up on what's real and see things that aren't there

Damned was I from the start

An unattached soul, a broken hanging from a string heart

The author's comments:
It's definitely about someone, or a lot of someone's.

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on Oct. 1 2010 at 11:41 pm
riversain DIAMOND, Clearlake, California
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omg that was beautieful i loved it i cant beleave it its as if i just red something that ive felt so strongly all my life its a awsome pome and thinx for writing it


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