jar of honey MAG

August 19, 2010
By pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.


a jar of honey,
left open on the table,
to drip and drizzle down the wall,
waiting for the jar to break and fall
a beating heart,
left open in my chest,
to bleed and spill down the wall,
waiting for it to break and fall,
laying shattered,
a jar of honey,
and my heart,
on the floor …
there is no more.



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misspinkpoet said...
on Apr. 16 2012 at 9:59 pm
misspinkpoet, Many, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Without a struggle, there can be no progress," Fredrick Douglass.

This really gave me a rush of chills after I read it, nicely written.

on Feb. 7 2011 at 6:46 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

thank you! and i will:)

ohdear BRONZE said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 6:36 pm
ohdear BRONZE, Tacoma, Washington
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This is simply amazing :) Keep writing!!

on Feb. 7 2011 at 5:39 am
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
30 articles 0 photos 414 comments

Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

wow thanks! :)

on Feb. 7 2011 at 5:39 am
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
30 articles 0 photos 414 comments

Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

thank you and i most definitly will:)

on Feb. 7 2011 at 4:29 am
musiqqlvr31 BRONZE, Chennai,Tamil Nadu, Other
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thats true..but good work..keep writing

on Feb. 6 2011 at 10:54 pm
HisPurePrincess ELITE, Flemington, New Jersey
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wow, i really love this.  it's so simple an beautiful.  awesome.

on Feb. 6 2011 at 8:05 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

who said there had to be a point? haha

on Feb. 6 2011 at 8:44 am
musiqqlvr31 BRONZE, Chennai,Tamil Nadu, Other
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nice rhyming and theme... but i dont get the point

on Feb. 5 2011 at 3:06 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

thanks! and definitly:)         

on Feb. 5 2011 at 3:05 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

haha yup:)mmmmmmmmmm

on Feb. 5 2011 at 2:53 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

thanks!!:)         

on Feb. 5 2011 at 12:59 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

Ahh, thank you so much!  =]

Heion said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 11:56 pm
Heion, Modesto, California
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"You have not done all you can in the world until you have lifted everyone so they suffer less than you."

I like it. Very intense, and really good metaphor's.

spiria BRONZE said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 7:44 pm
spiria BRONZE, Fullerton, California
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very strong and intense! I luv it :)

Can you check out some of my work?


on Feb. 4 2011 at 2:44 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
30 articles 0 photos 414 comments

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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

a very, very, VERY, gooooood woah.

on Feb. 4 2011 at 2:28 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

Thanks for reading- what did you mean by that comment on "Shadow"?  Haha Was that a bad whoa or a good whoa?

on Feb. 4 2011 at 2:15 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

hey thanks, and ill definitly do that:) im sure your work is great;p

on Feb. 4 2011 at 2:12 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

I couldn't help but notice the comment- If you type the screen name under advanced search, then it'll come up with all of that person's work.  =]

Annd, by the way, I love the poem.  It's great.  Keep writing.  =]  And if you want, check out my work?  It's sortof decent.  Hah. 


on Feb. 4 2011 at 1:57 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

thanks! i would love to, but when i click on peoples names nothing shows up...and it happens for everyone, not just you...so ill email teenink and see if i can get it to work, then i definatly will!




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