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jar of honey MAG
August 19, 2010
a jar of honey,
left open on the table,
to drip and drizzle down the wall,
waiting for the jar to break and fall
a beating heart,
left open in my chest,
to bleed and spill down the wall,
waiting for it to break and fall,
laying shattered,
a jar of honey,
and my heart,
on the floor …
there is no more.
© Brittan S., Chino, CA
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This article has 23 comments.
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 6:46 pm
thank you! and i will:)
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 5:39 am
wow thanks! :)
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 5:39 am
thank you and i most definitly will:)
musiqqlvr31 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 4:29 am
thats true..but good work..keep writing
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 6 2011 at 8:05 pm
who said there had to be a point? haha
musiqqlvr31 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 6 2011 at 8:44 am
nice rhyming and theme... but i dont get the point
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 5 2011 at 3:06 pm
thanks! and definitly:)
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 5 2011 at 3:05 pm
haha yup:)mmmmmmmmmm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 5 2011 at 2:53 pm
thanks!!:)
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2011 at 12:59 pm
Ahh, thank you so much! =]
Heion said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 11:56 pm
I like it. Very intense, and really good metaphor's.
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 2:44 pm
a very, very, VERY, gooooood woah.
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 2:28 pm
Thanks for reading- what did you mean by that comment on "Shadow"? Haha Was that a bad whoa or a good whoa?
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 2:15 pm
hey thanks, and ill definitly do that:) im sure your work is great;p
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 2:12 pm
I couldn't help but notice the comment- If you type the screen name under advanced search, then it'll come up with all of that person's work. =]
Annd, by the way, I love the poem. It's great. Keep writing. =] And if you want, check out my work? It's sortof decent. Hah.
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 1:57 pm
thanks! i would love to, but when i click on peoples names nothing shows up...and it happens for everyone, not just you...so ill email teenink and see if i can get it to work, then i definatly will!
Almost_Lover GOLD said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 10:07 am
this is awesomely dramatically sweet! anyways I love this peom, check out my work?
=]
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