do you love me?

August 19, 2010
i close my eyes and think of you
theres nothing else that i can do
i know you say you love me too
but it still seems like its not true
when i look into your blue eyes
i see that this is your disguise
and no matter how much i try
i still sit here alone and cry.





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PieIsAwkward said...
Feb. 7, 2011 at 5:06 pm

I liked this very much.

The words just seemed to flow when I said them in my head.

Great and awesome poem! :]

 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 1:29 pm
thanks so much! :)
 
WritingLoverForever said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 2:40 pm
I can totally relate. This is how I felt with my first love. His eyes are even blue! lol
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 10:12 am
i love blue eyes so much, so i guess i write about them a lot! haha
 
jhsironmen12 said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 4:42 pm
ok, now i hope im not getting annoying but i love this one too haha:)
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 7:05 pm
no your comments are awesome and they like make my day lol(:
 
jhsironmen12 replied...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 7:36 am
cool, I'll keep commenting if you do to:)
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 1:28 pm
of courseee lol
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 1:26 pm
^^             
 
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