I was young...

By , Mings Bight, Canada
i was young in years
he was old
i was wise
he was dumb

i thought age should speak
higher years should be matured
but he is a man
a pedophile
a black hearted monster

he did wrong
i did right
i told of that night
i tried my best
to lock him up
to put him behind bars
but he still runs free





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iluvwriting This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 4:33 pm

Sounds terrifying...more detail might produce more of an emotional reaction...maybe elaborate???

But i respect the courage in coming out with your story, it must be horrible. And to think such a monster still runs free...shudders

 
Damara...C replied...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 2:10 pm
yes i know... =( it sucks and my grandmother still remains with him. blech. Thanks for reading appreciate it alot=)Also thanks for ur concern i didnt really feel like going in with more detail bad enough that i wrote the poem also getting it published...
 
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