The Stages Of Love

September 6, 2010
By GummyBearr BRONZE, Blairsville, Georgia
GummyBearr BRONZE, Blairsville, Georgia
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Before you have the one you love...
The sight of them gives you butterflies...
You dream of the hugs you wish to recieve...
The words you can imagine being said, they're romantic,gentle,and full of love..

When at last, you have that special one, life couldn't get any better...
There's always tht spark of tendernesswhen his arms are gently holding you tight that goes with the feeling of security while the moment lives...
And when your eyes meet his, there's an unremovable, irreplacable smile upon both faces...
At last...his lips touch yours and it's breathtaking to know to know your dream has come true.

But when it's all said and done...
The feeling of emptyness takes place of that once hapy soul...
You see him in public, and the tears fall...
That promise,the one saying "he's just a guy", it's not true..
He's the love of your life.


The author's comments:
This poem was inspired by most recent heartbreak... These steps go with every relationship I've had since I learned what love is.

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on Sep. 24 2010 at 4:46 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

Wow, really gud.  i loved the wording, really gud. keep writing:)

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