September 6, 2010
By mask456 GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
mask456 GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
There is no fire without smoke

Sorrow takes my heart by the hand
Twisting fate and my mind
Ice erupts inside my soul
A unknown pain floods my body
I can't grasp or begin to understand
this strange thing called sorrow
A black veil thrown over my world
A raven croaking in the distance
It's the only thing that i can hear
Darkness looms
My world becomes black
While my tears become blue
And my heart bleeds red

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on Jul. 16 2011 at 4:31 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase."

Wow. This poem has so much meaning and emotion behind it. The way you portrayed such emotions was brilliant! I loved this. Good job. Check out my work?? Thankss

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