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Grief has never hit me so hard
Tear after tear falls from my face.
The pain is almost unbearable.
I miss you so much.
It seems like only yesterday we were together.
Now I’m alone. Separated, and all I can do is think about you.
Begging to hear your sweet melodic voice
Wishing to see your understanding eyes
And urging to be around your loving personality
The pain is almost unbearable.
I sink into great despair.
“Please, Please God,” I cry
“Let me see her again.”
There is a great silence.
Days pass
I slowly thin out
Sleep is almost impossible
And again I cry unto God,
“Please, Please God let me see her again!”
As I close my eyes I can hear your voice.
I start seeing an image of you.
Is this real?
I see every moment I had with you.
I quickly open my eyes, but again there is silence.
Slowly, I close my eyes again
I see every moment we had together.
I see your understanding eyes,
Hear your sweet melodic voice,
Feel your loving personality,
But this time my eyes stay shut and never shall I see you again



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Anyanka said...
Sept. 22, 2010 at 1:43 pm:
I laughed at the end about the finality of her closing her eyes. Wow she must be truly blind to give up everything for something so small. People who become too obsorbed in their memories lose their souls.
 
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LunaWingsFlyAway said...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 7:53 pm:
its a very beautiful and passionate poem...it gave me goosebumps from the depth...it spoke to me and its an amazing poem keep on wrting...check out my poem and comment
 
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CountryGothicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 3:49 pm:
Very nice poem...and very, very sad. All your poems so far seem to be rather emotional and tear provoking, I really like them.
 
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SKSK1214 said...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 11:35 am:
Very well written. I felt the passion and loss for you in me. If this is how you really feel, god bless you, and im sorry. It really spoke to me.
 
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just-a-joy said...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 8:51 pm:
this right here is cold i like the way u put being lonly missing some one keep writting
 
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