Betrayal

September 4, 2010
By Mcflyjr BRONZE, Wilmington, Massachusetts
Mcflyjr BRONZE, Wilmington, Massachusetts
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I fell for you,
I loved you with all my heart,
I trusted that you would love me,
I trusted that you would care about me.

All I did was care for you,
All I did was hope to be with you,
And yet all I got was laughs,
All I got was insults.

You were perfect in my eyes,
And then I was betrayed,
Betrayed by your looks,
By your actions.

What I thought was a sweet caring person,
Ended up being filled with hate,
And yet I couldn't stop loving you,
Though you couldn't love me.

I have one love,
And I've given it all to you,
You have one love,
And you've kept it to yourself.

Without loving,
How can you be human?
To give up love is to give up life,
To give up life is to give up everything.

I want your love,
I need your love.
I will do anything for your love,
No matter how much I'm betrayed.

I just need to know that you're safe,
I need to know how you're feeling,
To know you love,
To know you're safe with me.

Let me be there for you,
Stop this backstabbing and face the facts,
I'll be the best I can be for you,
I'll be anything for you.
As long as you love me.

I felt betrayed,
I was betrayed,
Not just by you,
But also by myself


The author's comments:
This about a girl I've loved with all my heart for a few years, and what she's done to me.

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Camii GOLD said...
on Feb. 7 2012 at 10:08 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
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it's amazing!

Mcflyjr BRONZE said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 9:37 pm
Mcflyjr BRONZE, Wilmington, Massachusetts
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Thank you!

iStorm GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 9:34 pm
iStorm GOLD, Anonymous, Other
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Favorite Quote:
You can't change your past, but you can change your future.

Wow that was amazing! You're a beautiful writer!

Mcflyjr BRONZE said...
on Oct. 7 2010 at 8:11 am
Mcflyjr BRONZE, Wilmington, Massachusetts
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Thank you!

on Sep. 20 2010 at 5:57 pm
forever-and-always GOLD, Auburn, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
hearts on fire minds on ice. - Terry Fisher

awww hun this is amazing.




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